A new dawn has arrived
The time is now reflection
Upon aspects that changed
Which improved our connection
Laughing at that old reflection
Passing me down the halls
Propelled my pride's protection
From you, but my heart has changed
As it embraces who you are
Because before, it couldn't sustain
That seemingly frail connection
While today, nothing's the same
Tomorrow, we'll try for perfection
1 comment:
If this is meant to be a trimeric, I believe you missed an essential component - repeated lines 2,3,4 of stanza #1. Nonetheless, the way you managed rhyming in the pseuo-trimeric is very nice... I mean I really like it.
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